Corax did have VERY pale skin though (so he n Konrad would look alike) because is homeworld did that to him, something to do with the rocks and minerals, over the years he developed a very pale complextion, same for why he has incredibly dark hair, personally i think the picture on the cover of that book Raven's Flight or whatever it was is actually pretty INNACURATE compared to most descriptions i've read. for one thing that bobcat hair style he has on the cover of that book...UGH he looks like a jew along with the innacurate tan (no offence, no racsim intended)
I like the look on Corax's face and, likewise, the chaos marine's helm. Not a big fan of the lighting claws looking like Freddie Kreuger claws but a nice piece. The colours set the mood well and the lighting helps with conveying the intensity of the moment.
hmmmmm could I be saving the best for last?...........yes I could!! the way I figure it after drawing the rest of the primarchs I should have a pretty good idea of how to make dudes look awesome and seeing as Horus and the Emperor are the most awesome ....you get the picture
It looks good, the background is very nice and the flame effects from his jump pack are well done as well. However, I think that the pose is a little stiff like how rather than look at the guy who he has by the throat, he's just staring off ahead of him in a full profile view. Also, the marine's helmet looks hilarious. Judging by the rest of the picture, I don't assume you meant to do that. I'm pretty sure it's the great big eyes that made it look that way. What I do really like about this picture, though other than the flame effects is the jump pack design. The aquila on the sides looks good. It's simple but gives it a unique look of the armor that a primarch might wear.
yeah he does have a ridiculously stiff pose, that's down to my complete inability to do a proper jump pack perspective pose,as stiff as this is it was the best of the lot (ugh!), the marine hes holding, or half of anyway, is not a space/chaos marine he's a kinda noise cultist and a little nod to what the emperors children will become
I used the personality of what I read of him more than anything else to get the look and I think I read somewhere that he had pale skin and black eyes and hair, all I had to do from there was make sure I did'nt draw the crow (the movie one!!)